We Meet... Poem by Randhir kaur

We Meet...

Rating: 5.0


Get ready my friend, finally
the vacations are to the end,
Pack your bag with a smile
because tomorrow we meet.
My apology and thank you I
just want to send.
Get ready my friend, finally
the vacations are to the end..
This long gap gave a
realization that roses are red.
So ere we ignore, let us
accept our mistakes..
Get ready my friend, finally
the vacations are to the end,
Pack your bag with a smile
because tomorrow we meet..

We Meet...
Sunday, July 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 02 August 2016

A happy time with friends is going to end and have to get lost in daily chores. Sound interesting. Like the simplicity and flow of the lines. Keep inking.

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Kishore Kumar Das 06 August 2016

Student life has got its own charm.......the hectic study followed by the vacation....the golden cycle goes on....you have captured the feelings beautifully in your positive poem......on the eve of friendship day....thanks for sharing..

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2016

Such a lively feel to this write. Friendships in student life are warm n genuine. They are probably the best part of student life that's primarily the reason a students looks forward to the end of vacations.

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Randhir Kaur 06 August 2016

Thank you Nosheen for your analysis and for reading it.

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Anil Pillai 04 November 2016

the poem has its charm, The students life.....again to be frank, , well crafted depiction....Yes keep it up! the good work!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2016

With a smile! From a mile seeing you joy. Thanks for sharing.

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B.m. Biswas 14 August 2016

beautiful...we all hanker after noe for the student life...but only nostalgic moments...nothing else.... 2nd interpretation.......take this friends as human beings in earth we li together...but soon it going that we have to leave it to meet death...another life..the second and possibly the final one......great poem.

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Randhir Kaur 06 August 2016

Thank you respected Anil Sir for the kind review.

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Randhir Kaur 06 August 2016

Thank you Kishore Sir for the feedback. My friends are the precious gift in life..Keep reading.

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