Whale Dance Poem by Jessica Jemima

Whale Dance

Rating: 5.0


You are growing old,
And your mind is aging too.
Your eyes are nearly closed,
And your moves are slowing, slowing...

But I still see the beauty
every time you show your dance,
For the ocean,
vast and blue.

I see the history of the world
in every twirl or dive,
It's there - almost gone -
fading, fading...

You seem to know the world,
All emotions and their ways,
For I see it in your dance,
For the ocean,
vast and blue.

So show it,
One more time, your dance,
For the ocean,
vast and blue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madly In Love 22 June 2007

Jessica i love the way this poem flows, it seems to me that you wrote this poem with ease, good poem keep writing i would love to read more of your work

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Ho 25 January 2021

Well whale poem Jessica

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Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Well penned poem Jessica

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Rachel Finn 20 February 2008

i think that ur poem speaks the truth about the whales and their future

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Jerry Hughes 05 July 2007

...this is a whale of a good poem - well done Jess

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Brooke Rose 29 June 2007

That is so sad. you are incredible. i love everything you have done. you inspire me.

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