Were You Afraid I Would Leave You Behind? Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I'm seeing here, hope I'm getting it right, a struggle with our inner selves....never quite sure if we've chosen the right path.......anyhow, it's an excellent write...sometimes, most times to be truthful, it's hard to leave 'pieces' of ourselves behind.....~~~love, marci.xo

that's a very good poem i liked it i give it a ten! your a very good writer~hazel

shadow boxing with the alter ego of ones consciousness is another tough one to play by the ear.. very alarming introspection.. of ones self...