Weakness Is Not Strong Poem by Lyn Paul

Weakness Is Not Strong

Rating: 4.8


When
You feel
Like Jumping off Sydney Harbour Bridge
Your stomach
Infested with sharks
Your sleep
Disrupted
Worrying
When
Darkness sees no wrong
Too much
Taken from you
Yet you know
Your journey
Changes lives
Every single day
So
Change your own life
Do for you
What you do for others
Remind yourself
Of others pain
Be proud for survival
The sun can shine everyday
Let no one
Take your sun
When you thought
It couldn't get worse
Yet it has!
Remind yourself
Weakness
Is not strong
Hope is.



Copyright Reserved 20th November 2015
Lyn Paul

Weakness Is Not Strong
Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,journey,sunshine,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 19 November 2015

Weakness is not strong. Hope Is..... (endless hugs) I hope you are OK.

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Tony Karas 19 November 2015

Weakness is not strong. Hope Is..... (endless hugs) I hope you are OK. Prayers....

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Michael Walker 22 November 2015

'Be proud of your survival'-very important. When you are living on the edge, hope is strong. Hope is stronger than despair. M. Walker.

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Kavya . 22 November 2015

What a positive poem this is! enjoyed reading! Yes let the sun within us not be taken by anyone.

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Jennifer Birchall 04 April 2019

You have given such a strong message in this poem dear Lyn, thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 July 2016

Survival! ! Change your own life. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 03 December 2015

Very nice poem, Lyn, with a wonderful message. Keep up the good work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Change your own life Do for you What you do for others Remind yourself Of others pain- - - - -true dictum. A well advised poem so nicely presented. Thanks for sharing.- - 10

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Jak Black 24 November 2015

Hope? Where would any of us be without hope? Your journey Changes lives Every single day.................. If you can have a positive effect on just one person then your life is worthwhile. Journey on and trust in the future. A meaningful message here Lyn. Well done.

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