We Hope Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

We Hope

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We hope
And flop
At each round
As no alternative is found

We have become static
With no basic
No principles is involved
And no stand is cleared

Such relation never exist
For long time and cease
Die premature death
And have no more breath

It has life alright
But no right
To show face any more
As it has lost original color

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

We hope And flop

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

good Khushi Singh25 minutes ago can improve

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Nice poem.. about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

its ok Jane Lomas11 minutes ago needs a little work to rhyme more, but I do like this poem Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

im not sure at the point Amber Gibson22 minutes ago im pretty sure you have a point but it confuses me to the point i cannot tell what it is.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

good Khushi Singh25 minutes ago can improve

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

good Khushi Singh25 minutes ago can improve

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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