We Are Now Humans (Inspired By The Good With The Bad By Soha Zaki) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

We Are Now Humans (Inspired By The Good With The Bad By Soha Zaki)

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Similar poles repel each other,
dissimilar poles attract each other.
My goodness attracts the badness,
and my badness attracts the goodness.
I am a moderator,
I can spend a little of my goodness
to balance your badness,
and I can spend a little of my badness
to balance your goodness.
Life is a game of give and take.
Could you have given something to me!
Could you have taken something from me!
We are enemies,
could we would have moderated ourselves
as each other's friends,
just to smile and say proudly,
we are now humans!

Tuesday, May 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: human being
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 May 2018

If only laws of nature could influence laws of men. Negatives repel. Vacuums are filled. Smile buddy.

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 May 2018

A thoughtful poem, with a lovely universal message.

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Rini Shibu 15 May 2018

Attraction of good and bad, makes the human relationships stronger.Great write

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Mj Lemon 18 May 2018

Very thought provoking words, Akhtar. If our bad qualities attract the good, then each one of us can be redeemed. Terrific verse.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2018

Life is a game of give and take and so it is UNDOUBTEDLY coming from Akhtar Jawad Janabh thee what if your name had been AKHSAR! ! ! ! (OFTEN) more than often

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Susan Williams 17 May 2018

A poem full of an original way of seeing the inner workings of building human relationships. Gives the reader much to ponder. And I am amazed how poetic you made this philosophic discussion- that should have been difficult but you gave this an easy flow with similarities and contrasts and superior word choices.

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A great poem that presents the intricacies of being a human being. Liked the closure lines.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2018

Same poles repel and besame poles attract is true. Life is a game of give and take is true. But we can't give and take something each other often. We are each other's friends, just to smile and say proudly, we are now humans! An outstanding poem.10

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