We..... Poem by Mallika Achuthan Menon
We.....
When two sets of shining eyes
One day met with each other
Then an untold story just begun
Our own love story, my dear...
The continuation of our last birth
Got a good conclusion now
Through our union once again.
We both appeared as two for all
But we are one, not one plus one
As we both own a single soul.
No one wrote a muse like this
And there will not be any more such
Only two characters are existing
In our tale, you and me....
Do you know who wrote this plot?
It is predestined by God
And He Himself is it's Author.
It's beauty should be restored by
giving spotless love to each other
We can nurture its own growth
by a mutual faithfulness
Together we could sup up merrily
An elixir of companionship
The denouement of our love story
Can be left in God's own hands.
So we should live our life with joy
Thus we could make a Heaven on earth! !
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I believe most poets wold agree we should not wait for heaven to come and get us, but actively to create a heaven on earth, composed not of wealth and power, but of desire and love. I especially like the special arithmatic of the heart in these lines: WE ARE ONE. IT IS NOT ONE PLUS ONE./WE ARE BOTH IN A SINGLE SOUL. That shows a type of love which transcends ordinary calculations. It's a risk to love so unconditionally, but it's a shame not to make such an effort. I am totally in sympathy with your poem, and responds to it whole-heartedly. But do not be discouraged if someone with a cynical mind-set rejects it. That would just prove my point: this is a poem for sympathetic souls.
I remember a line once I read I am living my own life And the life of those after me I am dying my own death And the death of those after me- following lines touched me very much We both appeared as two for all But we are one, not one plus one And the death of those after me-
Robust romantic poetry which radiates energy all around. You have rightly pointed out that the meeting of two loving souls can bring heaven on earth. This is bound to happen with these feelings: The denouement of our love story / Can be left in God's own hands.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 1:20:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Truly beautiful we become one soul when we love each other and heaven on earth becomes a reality! I love this stunning write and thanks for sharing!