**waves Of Soul** Poem by swagathnath rajeswari

This is a wonderful message and I loved the last verse because without it I would have been lost in this writing. The other parts are more artisic but less meaningful in and of themselves. I cannot say that I would necessarily change a thing. Even though, this is a writing for a mature audience of readers. GW62

A Very Beautiful Poem There. Nicely Written. Keep up The Good Job! ^^ Good Luck!

dear! really a nice write.... especially i like this line..... it is you in me and me in you......others wont agree with it.... the waves of soul is endless....... there is no parameters to joyous of soul.... Endless learning incomplete.......when the learning incomplete? by making the other soul unhappy..... the learning is completes by understanding others and make them happy...... some soul shows the strange behaviour....... yes! ! this lines is really true.... who is the master of the soul? the soul who smiles in all situation and facing the problem with smile is the master of it........ all should try to make it pure and learn themselves a beautiful life learn and make the soul on earth to be peaceful... in verse, i enjoyed reading it..... in life, no words to say.......bcos still u are naive........

Such a mature write at such a tender age...............yes soul learns to take birth........and when learning is finish......the cycle of birth and death is also finished...10++++...........1000000000000000000+++++ for such a good write at young age........

wow itz soo soo nice..... very goood poem