Golden Morning Poem by swagathnath rajeswari

Golden Morning

Rating: 2.7


When the white blue sky dawns by
golden light peeping into the blue land!

The Songs of cuckoo birds
gave welcome notes to the sun! !

The silver moon and the twinkling stars
merrily say good bye to the radiant sun! !

Oh! but clouds manage to cover the sun
hopelessly the hands are not sufficient
as the radiant sun pierce into thy with fond! !

The cold chil wind slices over the greeny grasses
the flowers like a coloured diamond on them
as dew shines glitters in the rays
the golden morning welcomes me! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 24 March 2009

A very nice start for a young man and keeping in mind its probably in your 2nd language at least, its admirable. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing. :)

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Eric Dale 13 March 2009

This is a nice poem but a bit childesh if you ask me not in a bad way it is still a nice poem

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