Tour Of A River Poem by swagathnath rajeswari

Tour Of A River

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Its amazing I can`t see the other end
Villages, towns, bridges passed all
I am wondered who is driving you
the tour is too long!
I am more surprised suddenly a kingfishier
pecking a fish gone with the wind
and I thought the livings are so admirable! !

The beautiful silver stream falls from where
I imagine the merry of the rivulet on her tour
Falling between the hills
the sound and force drive you all along
how you ride like a horse gallops
travelling tirelessly all these days! !

I am amazed can you take me a tour
Oh! mother river
I am amazed can you take me a tour! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

it would be a lovely trip if the river could take u along

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Pablo Cruise 19 March 2009

Intriguing visions from such a young mind.

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

a fine interesting composition...lovely poem...Thanks for sharing! ! !

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Martine Kolber 18 March 2009

Nice write, I especially like the last stanza; -) Keep writing; -) Take care, Martine

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