When flowers are blooming for a regretless destiny
Someone here is wandering in a watery city
Where rains intertwine fogs, together coat the earth
Someone here is drifting in a confusing myth
Under all mercurial veils they search for an encounter
Knowing not every soul might jumble together
Aimlessly pass by those faces amid the flowers
Stand alone, with breezes' laughter, pure dreamers
Neal wrote a marvelous endorsement for this poem that I can only say ME, TOO! I have felt this poem long before I read it. I have a deep regard for poems that reveal our interior lives and this one does so with amazing perception. There is no trace of negative emotion or disgust with failure. Your poem is about a life committed to the necessary journey we all must take if we are to find our true selves and that compatible other person so that together we can enrich each other's lives and share our joy to increase each other's happiness.
Yes, enrich each other's life, what a wonderful perception you brought me. You are enriching my life, Daniel
I have wandered in watery cities, searching for meaning, searching for souls of friendship. I have felt this poem long before I read it. Bravo.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really brilliant poem, so much entwined in just two verses.