Water Comparison Poem by Jerrell Frazier
Water Comparison
Flowing cool delightful
Filled with energy and beautiful creatures
Bending sparkling filed with life
Water
Complex but yet so simple
Cast a stone and reveil its ripple
Water
A live and well
Just like us humans but we can't tell
From molecule to cell broking down to atoms
We can't tell that beauty and water is always around us
Wednesday, December 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,reality,science
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5/1/2024 5:26:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
'Flowing cool delightful Filled with energy and beautiful creatures Bending sparkling filed with life' this is good, filed should be filled, I do this sometimes, shows promise; talent, therefore I ask, is it what you wanted to say, or do you want to develop or change it a little, the differences are depths :) good luck and power to your pen
i chose filed to be different from filled because it shows that the water has all types if life in it that's why i used filed instead of filled so i wouldn't repeat myself and confuse others.