Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Watch the game


I have knocked the door
But still far behind and poor
It may improve with more posting
Comments may pour in and it is exciting

Poets receive great applause
The passion and feeling starts to rouse
It is experience and feeling
That is almost heart filling

Poems come out with no extra efforts
But anxiety grow like anchoring at port
It takes long years to end wait
Let us see what will the fate

Hard word pays
Ground work us laid
Only to improve in the field of communication
That is beginning of good relation

I have still long way to go before death
But it has watered the earth
The seeds may grow to give pleasant show
Then earth may smile with all greenery to grow

I shall watch the game and enjoy
Let others too feel part of the joy
Poems competition is not for play
It gives some pleasure any way

Submitted: Saturday, August 03, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 30, 2013

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