Watch The Game Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Watch The Game

Rating: 5.0


I have knocked the door
But still far behind and poor
It may improve with more posting
Comments may pour in and it is exciting

Poets receive great applause
The passion and feeling starts to rouse
It is experience and feeling
That is almost heart filling

Poems come out with no extra efforts
But anxiety grow like anchoring at port
It takes long years to end wait
Let us see what will the fate

Hard word pays
Ground work us laid
Only to improve in the field of communication
That is beginning of good relation

I have still long way to go before death
But it has watered the earth
The seeds may grow to give pleasant show
Then earth may smile with all greenery to grow

I shall watch the game and enjoy
Let others too feel part of the joy
Poems competition is not for play
It gives some pleasure any way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

I have knocked the door But still far behind and poor

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Chevelle Wernsmann4 minutes ago Very nice! :)

0 0 Reply
Dinesan Madathil 03 August 2013

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. If you don`t mind, please see that a little more care is taken with regard to grammar henceforth...

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good write Mehta join in on the game

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno likes this.

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Nice Seema Tabassum Ali4 minutes ago Good! Comment +1 poetry is a beauty within in us that some will never understand

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Joslyn Mars2 minutes ago i enjoy your seed and growth imagery. And poetry does bring so much pleasure...and pain. Comment +1 like this!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success