Wasted Poem by Captain Tyin Knots

Wasted

Rating: 5.0


I'm like the darkness
I have no soul
I'm like a heart
With a big hole
I'm like a demon
I have a knife
I'm like the Reaper
I'll take your life
I have no meaning
I have no cause
I'll destroy your mind
I'll give you flaws
I'm very evil
I'm very confusive
I'll make you angry
I'll make you abusive
You'll find yourself
Or maybe you won't
You might like it
But your kids sure don't
You'll make enemies
You'll fight at night
You'll make friends
You'll think you're alright
But truth be told
You're a loser
You have nothing to live for
You're a f*cking boozer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 15 March 2009

This is a real zinger, It is a message that should be put on the back of all booze bottles like they warn you on the effects of Cigarettes smoking. A very good write indeed 10+++

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