Was It Heaven Or Hell Poem by Crystal Pierce
Was It Heaven Or Hell
Was it heaven or hell?
Old as they were to young to know.
I hope they are well,
wherever they go.
They cursed on Fridays,
and prayed on Sundays.
So how could I know,
where they may go?
They were kind souls,
but their life was filled with holes.
I wonder what they were thinking, when they died.
Did the Death Angel look them in the eye?
There are many questions to ask,
but I'll wait for someone else to pass.
So what was it, did they do life swell.
It's either heaven or hell.
Stray thoughts coming out of a sad person upon the death of a friend trying to find answers to some obvious questions about after life. Thanks. They were kind souls, but their life was filled with holes. There are many questions to ask,
well written crystal, i enjoyed reading it. Wish you Good Luck and keep continuing it..
nice poem, crystal....i like it....nicely written...thanks for sharing...
pretty good rhyming for a '15-year-old'. but, PROOFREAD your poem, and if you've done it once, i suggest doing it again. if you have any questions, please ask. let me see another one! thanks for sharing. i swear 24/7; where will i GO? ? ? ! bri :) [ok, not 24/7]
Yeah, it's a habit of mine not to look back through what I've typed. LOLZ
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a nice poem on sensitive topic... liked it... keep writing... looking forward to your feedback.. thanks :)
Thank you Jenie Franksay. And to be honest I got the idea from Mark Twain. He wrote a short story called Was It Heaven or Hell, and it was about two old sisters you had never lied and then fell sinful when their niece and great niece fell ill. And I probably just bored you to death with that but that's the story and I'm sticken to it. Haha