Hot Sun
'So hot' said the Sun
'Sail through all seas' said earth
'Yes, sweet dreams' said sun
Hungry Sun
Sun was sailing seas
All aqua steamed high beyond
Grilled earth well eaten
Angry Earth
Angry earth bittered
Sun hid and clouds rushed to pour
'Hold your tongue' warned God
Excellent piece Indira Thanks for sharing this bravo-worthy poem
A value laden piece of poetry! Loved it dear madam! Stay always happy, healthy and blessed!
A reader is transported to the great scenes presented in this cleverly written poem. To my favorites.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A vivid and brilliant depiction of the long term heating of earth's surface.Liked the superb imagery of these three well crafted haiku.