Warmth Is A Burden Poem by Sandra Fowler

Warmth Is A Burden

Rating: 4.9


I hear the classic verse of your rebuke.
The music of a constant, static bird
Crackles the gray indifference of the sky.
A winter bleach of sunlight stings the eyes.

You bring me coffee in a heavy cup.
Warmth is a burden that no mind can bear.
The pattern of your gesture on the grass
Gives anger a dimension out of time.

My eyes record the image of that sound.
Morning is hammered into words of gold.
The moments slip like lost time down my cheeks.
You tilt my face to catch the amber drops.

Such overwhelming brightness lifts my lids.
No shadow lives against such vividness.
You win the landscape with your poetry.
I trust you to tell no one of its warmth.

Previously published: Ellipsis Magazine, Westminster College, Utah

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 05 December 2006

really like this one. Trust it is an older one of yours. Like everything about it ~ essence, primarily. sjg

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Cyclopseven R 18 December 2006

'My eyes record the image of that sound' -I like this phrase very much. A soul embracing poetry. Work of a refined mind.

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Kelly Hanson 18 December 2006

beautiful images. i felt so naked reading this - as if you read my soul.

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Alison Cassidy 22 December 2006

How skilfully you use the imagery of nature to convey a moment of warmth and intimacy. You never reveal too much, but leave the reader to imagine... This is the voice of a true poet. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Melvina Germain 06 January 2007

Great ilmagry displayed here Sandra in this most beautiful poem. A pure work of art, thankyou for sharing this beauty.---Melvina---

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premji premji 03 July 2009

your words impart the warmth of poetry deep into my soul...........

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Sonya Florentino 18 June 2009

The intimacy is so poignant…. some of your poems are so cinematic Sandra...

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Jim Norausky 21 March 2009

So classic. I bow before your talent in respecr... Jim

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Astonishing imagery! Compact...........eloquent...........thoughtful indeed! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

true...but a burden one loves to bear...'winning the landscape with poetry' is your usual trait, sandra 10

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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