Walking On The Lake Poem by Susha Strauss

Walking On The Lake

Rating: 3.5


walking on the lake
blue water shimmering
waves coming in
licking the grains of sand away

blue water shimmering
waves going out
licking the grains of sand away
I wonder why the water is blue

waves going out
waves coming in
I wonder why the water is blue
waves crashing like thunder

waves coming in
waves going out
waves crashing like thunder
walking on the lake

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

Beautiful imagery and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Susha..

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Kelly Kurt 17 November 2015

Lovely poem, Susha. Thanks

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Shakil Ahmed 17 November 2015

you have painted the picture of a lake nicely with beautiful words, thanks for sharing,

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