Wait Poem by Anne Yun

Wait

Rating: 3.5


You may cry at nights
for me, for him
for days past with no light
so do i
sometime, sometime

Friday, August 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lights,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

Anne, you see yourself in eveyone. That is as it should be. We are one human family.++10

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Fantastic, nice writing.

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Daniel Brick 22 August 2016

What a tender poem, and you do not allow even one word to disturb that tenderness.You acknowledge someone else's grief and offer an understated consolation, no brash advice that probably would not help, just a a patient sharing of a time of sadness. And the last two lines do shed light in this time of darkness when you admit to a similar sadness. And offer just the simple consolation of your presence.

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Anne Yun 22 August 2016

Dear Daniel, your words make me feel that you know me so well. I have a poetic dream that my words can give some light to people in loneliness and darkness, I know how helpless and hopeless could life be when you're trapped by your own dark side, and the only thing can help is to let them know 'you're not alone' 'i know you, i know what you're experiencing'

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