Hey, You There Poem by Anne Yun

That is nice., I read it once, I read twice, I read it thrice, and it was still nice. O. P.

Your sun is kissing my stars goodnight //Ι can not find out the syntactical position and function of the wors ''goodnight'' here..It sound though quite nice.

morning chases the night. sun kissing the stars........ wonderful imagination. you are romantic. dev

Oh! What a beautiful concept; what an exquisite piece of poetry! Loved reading. Congrats!

Wow- - I am in awe and wonder at this little poem.

excellent piece of work....

dear Anne, you're a talented poet.. I like your poetry very much This poem, short but brightly penned, is a little gem. Only one thing, maybe.. May I suggest just a little change? '' Ask no more the distance from dew to grass Nor the way leading twilight to moonlight When i begin searching for you My morning chases your night when you start talking to me Your sun kisses my stars goodnight ''

My morning is chasing your night - beautiful. I liked this line.