Visit To The Zoo(Nursery Rhymes) Poem by Hira Akhtar

hira, i enjoyed this again. bri ;)

One, two We went to the zoo Three, four A fierce wild boar Five, six Fluffy white chicks Seven, eight Charming deer's gait Nine, ten A big lion's den loved your lines.....

good poem for childern interest

Well done my child. Don't take Bri Edwarss' comments otherwise. He is your best friend if he lets you know about your weakness. He pointed out many lapses to me and helped me in improving my poetry. He is still guiding me and I call him my teacher.

this comment is about Visit To The Zoo by HIra Akhtar, despite what PH put above (after Comments about this poem) [PH put the title Oh My Dear! ]. i like it. nice rhymes. but here is a tip for you. : Dear Vs. Deer One, two, The poem's so true Three, four, Your little sis will adore Five, six, I'll play, on you, no tricks Seven, eight, But I'll tell you out straight Nine, ten, Check your dear spelling again thanks for sharing. bri :)