Vision Poem by Srijeeta Manna

Vision

Rating: 5.0


Life under a trigger,
impatient to leave,
craving for love.
I close my eyes
and the flashback starts.....

Light from the window
kept me awake till the eternity.
A touch to make me feel free.
Desire running through,
carrying me over to the new world
where i hope to meet you on the half way.

I am not lost in the darkness of light;
but i am lost in u.

Free me from this bondage and let me go
because
my life is under a trigger
impatient to leave,
craving for love
from you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 26 December 2012

A fine poem of intimacy

0 0 Reply
Aloke Mukherjee 19 December 2012

A good poem. One can feel the passion.

0 0 Reply
Utsav Patel 08 December 2012

Nicely written dear... I just love it...

1 0 Reply
Gajanan Mishra 08 December 2012

good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

0 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success