Venus Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Venus

Rating: 5.0


Early morning, evening and night,
I see a star twinkling bright,
I love sweetheart your pleasing light,
Unlike moon, don’t change your sight,
And it’s you not changing your phases,
Why the sun so cruelly erases,
From blue paper your lovely face,
Polygonal charms and your grace,
Where do you sleep during the day,
Like a teen aged doll made of clay,
Are you in love, what do you dream,
Feel you running in my vein’s stream,
A distant beauty beyond my reach,
The old admirer what do you teach.

She looked at me with a tangent smile,
The cold old guy in a moment juvenile!
I stretched my arms towards the sky,
It’s love in that one dreams to fly,
The bright star performed her duty,
Filled my heart with love and beauty!

Venus
Thursday, August 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: juvenile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 06 August 2015

Splendid picture to go with a splendid poem! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2015

A wonderfully penned piece to the evening star and goddess of love

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2015

The bright star performed her duty, Filled my heart with love and beauty! ...... really amusing. A brilliant poem having stunning expression. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Many thanks Akhtar sir....10

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 August 2015

A sweet and beautiful poem.......................................10

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Jaishree Nair 06 August 2015

Well articulated and rhymed.enjoyed the word flow

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