Untitled Poem by Breann Vilsack

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Rating: 5.0


Oh those summer days, We use to climb trees and swim in ur pool. Oh those summer days we got in so much trouble both our moms thought we always be together. Oh those summer days we carvey our initals into every tree we could. Oh tohse summer days at the park we we'd tell each other everything. You were and alway will be my bestfriend. Then one summer you tell this is it, the last here with me. I cry so hard when you say this. Oh those summer days we spent meant the world to me.

Oh how i wish i had those summer days and you back.
oh how i wish i had those summer days and you back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Warner 08 March 2012

'Those Summer Days with You' is a good title for an even better poem.

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

THIS IS A MARVELLOUS PIECE OF ART …………………………………….. What a nice poem IT IS! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’

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