Until! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Until!



The air is quiet until it is agitated,
The water is calm until it is frustrated,
The earth is peaceful until it is violated,
The human are wise until they are provoked.

The clouds are merrier until these are collided,
The fire is fun and pleasant until it is spread,
The immunity is good until it is mutated,
The human are tolerant until they are contaminated.

The childhood is enjoyable until the puberty strikes,
The adolescent is seeking fun until the responsibilities arrive,
The youth is full of energy until the children are added,
The middle age is very fast, until the new nests are formed.

The old age is just nice until the sickness knocks,
Everything is good and predictable in the life of human,
When simplicity and sincerity are followed,
Face the challenges, until the solution is found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 08 December 2012

WOW i loved this, it 's like a reminder for every stage of life for people and giving a guide for younger..loved it_Soul

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Chandra Thiagarajan 07 December 2012

All the four para's are scintillating particularly the last line -Face the challenges, until the solution is found.- An enjoyable poem.

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