Ultimatum Poem by Gayathri Ramasubramanian

Ultimatum



Do you remember when
in one October
we met for a cup of coffee and
took a walk
on the beach?
The sea glistened with sunshine golden yellow;
The bamboo trees you admired
smiled letting the leaves brush on
as we passed by.
You too caressed my shoulder
With a flicker of smile on your lips
Crushing my heart.
At first I was oblivious
of you walking with me discreetly,
Until I felt the thorns turn to velvet
And my path was strewn with petals of glorious joy.
I remember well that you teased
the way I catch onto things late
my sense of direction
my cooking…
May be your memories are better than you,
They don’t desert me even for a while,
With me they rejoice, with me they lament!

Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamali Vidiyala 11 December 2015

Only memories can be cherished forever!!.. Well tried aunty... Beautifully described...

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Chitra Sundararajan 08 December 2015

Very nice....Loved the last 3 lines and they are so true!

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Chitra Sundararajan 08 December 2015

Very nice poem...loved the last 3 lines and they are so very true!

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Sakeela Yusuf 07 December 2015

I loved it...amazing work mam..keep writing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 December 2015

Memories of the past are part of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks a lot...

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