Godfrey Morris

Bronze Star - 2,706 Points (August 1,1982 / Kingston, Jamaica)

Ultimate Betrayal - Poem by Godfrey Morris

You once promised the sun
the moon and the stars maybe.

I did believe.

My heart I so entrusted
to only have it ripped apart.

So much as the delicate wings of a fl'wer

These eyes of yours appeal no more

So now I ask
When you say you love me?

Please say it as if you care.


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copyright (c) 2013

Comments about Ultimate Betrayal by Godfrey Morris

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 4:48:00 PM)

    agree with Valerie, your truthfully words give a soul to this poem
    very good my friend (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    agree with Valerie, your truthfully words give a soul to this poem
    very good my friend (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,515 Points Valerie Dohren (5/31/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Those special words should be said truthfully, but they are said too often without being genuine. Good one Godfrey. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013


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