*** Twohearts Blanket *** Poem by Inner Whispers

*** Twohearts Blanket ***

Rating: 5.0


Drops of rain ripped an aching soul
through the morning cry of longing's call,
cuddled at the cold, red empty couch
mind is flowing at thy colliding thoughts!

Bitter tasted at thy sweet embrace
longings felt at thy fulfilling gaze,
missing soul aches at thy loving heart
it's all because TwoHearts are far apart!

Cried much in pain, tears flowed profusely
temperature rises, anger, hatred and disgust felt truly,
why on earth men are destroyed by jealousy
mistrusting ruins one's mind with negativity!

Ah...how any of this TwoHearts see the truth
that all is left but tiring souls of both,
giving up dreams, emptied hope
wept without tears, felt pain and elope!

This TwoHearts blanket will never be used I guess
no one wants to pull and wrapped it in success,
longings will stay, no hopes and dreams will lay
no blanket to warm this TwoHearts together on May.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

nice metaphors used...fine imagery...lovely poem.....10+++

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Rey Sanidad 03 February 2009

Do you still feel the pain? Sweet poem, I'll try to read again. Kumusta, ingat palagi kaibigan...

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