Two Leaves Poem by Glen Kappy

Two Leaves

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from "While Passing Through"/Winter

Two winter-bleached leaves—
mulberry—in the ghost light
of a street lamp—
curled, deeply shadowed
on my driveway.

The two of them
there on the cold concrete
in pre-dawn darkness
arrest my gaze—
are a still life.

Wednesday, February 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,leaves,light,perspective,shadow,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 March 2018

You are a close observer of Nature! Really enjoy your snippets showing your eye for detail! !

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Glen Kappy 05 March 2018

thank you, valsa, for noticing and appreciating. the subject matter (the two leaves) demanded the detail to communicate why it arrested my attention. hope you are well in all ways, glen

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Bharati Nayak 25 February 2018

The two of them there on the cold concrete in pre-dawn darkness arrest my gaze- are a still life. - - - A lovely perspective- - On the concrete the fallen leaves - - the still life- -to wait for the dawn.

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Glen Kappy 26 February 2018

hi, bharati! good to see your comment. thank you for reading and for your appreciation. hoping you are well in all ways, glen

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 February 2018

This is awesome drop. Harsh reality of the winter. Enjoyed.

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Glen Kappy 24 February 2018

Cool! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. -Glen

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Seamus O Brian 22 February 2018

It is amazing how simple objects can become arresting catalysts for deeper introspection. You have skillfully transferred that arresting moment of wonder to your reader, efficiently and deftly weaving a few memorable visuals. I especially enjoyed the image of the ghost light and the deep shadow of the curled leaf.

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Glen Kappy 22 February 2018

thanks, neal. as it happened i went out to the cold to put trash in the dumpster receptacle, and there they were. hoping you're well in all ways, glen

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Arrest by gaze but still in life..Wonderful poem reflecting the aftermath of harsh winter

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Glen Kappy 22 February 2018

hi, rini! thanks for reading this poem and your comment. once again i was surprised by beauty. may this be a continual experience in our lives. -glen

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