Two Bright Eyes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Two Bright Eyes

Rating: 4.9


Bare eyes shine in night,
look so powerful and bright
Keep staring but not made known,
Seem they are made for my own

Say not words but also not hide,
just smile broad with eyes wide,
convey deep feelings with no regret,
bright and shining eyes speak not yet,

why close eyes alone?
and face not covered,
So eyes when shut,
face may reveal,

You close the eyes,
life come to an end,
glitter and shine,
smile peters out,

find me so close even not near,
distance more but mind fear,
eyes shut but separation bear,
Near to come is idea to cheer,

You may say you are around, ,
even go round but not found
with steps so gentle on ground,
little it heard with no sound,

Oh, two eyes,
just face unveil,
lower it down to neck,
Find me there just to check,

Eyes may shine,
face may reveal,
wounds may heal,
love may look real,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pittle Shaileja 29 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright eyes always look beautiful..10

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Ratna Patel 01 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, revceal so many things....10

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Ketan Rajgor 01 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright eyes are bright and shine..10

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Jayant Manik 15 August 2009

bright eyes are very powerful....10

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Rupa Shah 19 August 2009

eyes show ther real way for us....10

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

You close the eyes, life come to an end, glitter and shine, smile peters out,

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 October 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known,

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

and face not covered, So eyes when shut, face may reveal,

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Suresh Vakil 02 October 2009

why close eyes alone? and face not covered, So eyes when shut, face may reveal,

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Edwina K 29 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright...........10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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