Turkey Sandwich Poem by Ruth Walters

Turkey Sandwich

Rating: 5.0

Miss Jeffries was cold,
like a dry, stale turkey sandwich.
She was always in a foul mood,
curling up at the edges.
She'd pick and prod and scream
for no reason,
similar to a crazed old fowl,
spiteful, sharp spurs,
and always ruling the roost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

I loved the poem, but I say 'no comma after Jeffries! ! ! ' 'Curling up at the edges' makes me think of wilting lettuce or a scowling face.

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

Ruth, PH stole comment before I was ready but DID NOT say it would be published. I'm therefore 'forced' to tediously recreate my last? comment. Rats! ! (cont.)

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Rob Lamberton 21 March 2024

I've tasted a few fowl birds!

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Loved the subtle humour.. nice poem

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

five stars ***** ;)

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

(cont.) 6 - a Mother Superior 7 - the head of the House of Lords 8 - a truck driver 9 - your bablysitter 10 - a neighbor OR a combination of some or all of those 1-9. : )

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Ruth Walters 27 October 2023

kind of, she was my teacher, a catholic lady who took a dislike to me....I was only 6 years old

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

(cont.) Let me guess. Miss Jeffries was 1 - a lesbian, before 'they' were 'allowed' 2 - your great aunt 3 - your boss 4 - a small business owner 5 - a teacher (cont.)

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Ruth Walters 30 October 2023

My teacher. I was about 5 years old or maybe I was 6, I can't remember exactly

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Ruth Walters 27 October 2023

You're so funny : )

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