Truth X Poem by Magic What'sHerName

Truth X

Rating: 5.0


We were sitting in a booth
Nows the time to tell the truth
I never really liked you
I'm sorry I couldn't be honest with you
I didn't want to lose you as a friend
And I don't want to pretend
That I like you as more than a friend
So I said yes, when I didn't want to
I'm sorry I never really liked you
Yeah I know I'm heartless
Yeah I know I'm worthless
But you were an awsome friend
You make me smile and that's not a pretend
But I only like you as a friend
The turth is I like someone new
I'm sorry I wasn't that into you
You can hate me all you want
I won't try to change your mind
I wasn't even kind
Since you told me you love me
But I'm sorry I didn't love you too.

*(A poem about lies, Kinda makes you wanna die, When you can only make the guy cry) *

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 03 July 2009

I can understand so much in this poem.2nd line down, now's-needs an apostrophe to make it read better, or better yet-now is? 15th line down, truth is spelled wrong. Other than those 2 minor things, I can relate alot to this poem. I read your poetry when I can, so please don't get irritated if I come across a word that can be better. Consider is free editing? Your works are important. I love poetry. All poetry.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 June 2009

Love is tight when you're young, maybe not existent as you get older.

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