Truly Refreshing Poem by Alfred Barna

Truly Refreshing

Rating: 4.7


One cannot think
And blindly follow
As a horrid potion one must drink
And kindly swallow
The color of one's trust
Some say, must be red, some blue
But I say with disgust
Stand defiant and politely eschew
Walk to the well unaccompanied; crystal and clear
For thought went into those waters, for this cup I share

Thursday, November 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: political utopia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crayon Poet 30 September 2019

Utopian political ideals come at the enormous cost of personal liberty - your pen is filled with wisdom.

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Bonaventure Onuabuchi 15 April 2019

You are very good with rhymes dear, thanks for sharing this wonderful piece

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 January 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Alfred Barna. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 29 November 2018

Good poem............10+ Best wishes for you

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