We started out good, Just like we should;
We had a good run, But now that its done;
My heart will be with you, Even though im feeling blue;
What would you do, If I said to you;
Let's start all over, But with no other;
If you say no, I have no place to go;
So please say yes, Its just a request;
You mean so much to me, I just wish you would see; There is no other, Except for you my lover.
I think is too flatly for a poem because poem different from the a diary keep on fighting :)
heartfelt and sweet, romantic write...sad also...well done..enjoyed -SG x
I love it very well writen and comes right from the heart i agree with ur cuzin great job Hun! ! ! !
its an amazing poem. like jason said. theres truly no other way to word this. congratz kota.
this is a really good poem congrats
I say 'Yes' lol this is such a beautiful poem. It has just so much feeling in it and I love it so much. It just goes to show that even guys have a soft spot. I love it. <3 Dream
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is amzingly good bro i cant think of any other way to word this better its just that good