Treasured Past Poem by Iram Jamil

Treasured Past

Rating: 5.0


Often when I'm alone,
I think of you...
The sweet treasured past..
Filling my remembrances with joy,
But! !
Unbelievable..
At times..
It becomes,
When a flash of thought..
waves over......
Ah! departing has occurred! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irum . 26 February 2009

so simple and beautiful and true :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Iram. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

'When a flash of thought.. waves over...... Ah! departing has occurred! ! ' Wonderful poem with wonderful lines!

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Afzal Hussain 18 May 2009

It's simply beautiful.

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Faran Khalid 18 May 2009

very nice poem keep it up 10 plusssssssssss

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 April 2009

B e a u t i f u l

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