Trapped In My Own Mind Part 3 Poem by joshua reid

Trapped In My Own Mind Part 3

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If in my quest to achieve my goals
I stumble or crumble and lose my soul
Those that knew me would easily co-sign
There was never a life as hard as mine
No father no money no chance and no guide
I only follow my voice inside
if it guides me wrong and i do not win
I'll learn from my mistakes and try to achieve again
I know not what I search for
But I know I have yet to find it,
Because it is invisible to the eye
My heart must search to it blinded.
And if by chance I find it,
Will I know my mission is achieved?
Can one come to conclusions,
Before the question is conceived?
Just as no one knows
what lies beyond the shore,
I will never find the answer to
what it is that I search for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Ng Li Hoon 31 August 2008

I like all the 3 trapped in my own mind poem.You must have spent a lot of effort on them. Good job boy! Keep up the good work!

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Tanya Stanford 18 August 2008

Out of all 3 of your poems titled trapped in my own mind, this is my favorite one.

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