Transience Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Transience

Rating: 5.0


Repose doesn't come up ripe
no more inputs, right
what could be such super feed
that ignites robust sleep

Thoughts in, thoughts out,
passing shows-
all passive on the track-
forget what? Nothing is new
old wine and balanced glass!

Waiting on the eyelids closed
a shadow super dark,
casts a ring to rustic light
that rolls- up and down, in sparks

Grapevine on the window aisle
the distant singing lark
brightest is the moonlit sky
drowned into a dream, this fast?

21st Dec 2019

Saturday, December 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,imagery,life,night,sleep,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2020

Super Dark! ! ! A shadow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 January 2020

Transience.....the oldest song on earth, each time in a brand new coat, and created in full elegance and new spirit. I must exclaim again: What a Beauty is this laden and layered poem! so many marvelous metaphors to enjoy! Thank you so much for sharing this fantastic though sad poem, Kesav.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 January 2020

New becomes old, old becomes new. It is all His Grace. The sleep and the dream also. Thanks for your detailed feedback Sylvie. Liked

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