Tortoise's Feathers Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Tortoise's Feathers

Rating: 5.0


Among the ruins I sat on a stone bench facing an isolated pond.
All of a sudden a tortoise came up from the muddy water.
And she's older than my Great Grandma it seems,
But she called me uncle.
Oh! How I am wearied along this useless journey?
'Hey! Uncle this isn't an ideal place to roam around,
I'll give you my feathers better you fly and try another place.'
I borrowed her feathers and said; 'Thank you.'
I flew the whole day but still I see the pond below
And I realized that I cannot fly anymore leaving the ruins.

* To the deceased Sri Lankan Veteran Dramatist Actor and Author Henry. Jayasena in gratitude.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 17 November 2009

How many of us wear illusion as a permanent garment in this mysterious world. Your tortoise's feathers are as ephemeral as are the Emperor's new clothes it would seem. A sad and reflective poem - with heart. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sonya Florentino 17 November 2009

death changes everything.....

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Sandra Fowler 15 November 2009

Very profound, a sad realization. Kind wishes, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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