Too Human Poem by Lyn Paul

Too Human

Rating: 4.8


Too many things
I almost did
Too many things
I didn't

I have been Too Human
Never taking
Just guiding, giving
Realising
I have lost

Fighting for others
Challenges
Goals
Only Survival

Waiting
To Be accepted
When I accepted
This whole world
A Long, long ago

So grow
Just wait
For whatever is next
The fight
For everyday

Are there Miracles
For sometimes
They are needed

Hope is always there
I have always
Held hope in my hands
For self
For others

May People
Just be
A little
Kinder to others

NOT JUST THEMSELVES


Copyright Reserved November 2018
Lyn Paul

Too Human
Wednesday, November 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,humanity,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 28 November 2018

an excellent write but I am afraid I have no hope at all

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Riza Braholli 16 February 2019

Hope is always there I have always Held hope in my hands For self For others... Lyn you write beautifully... the humor for you and for all of us is the air of life and its goals... congrats by dr Riza

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Khairul Ahsan 15 November 2020

'Hope is always there I have always Held hope in my hands For self For others' - That's the right direction for all of us to follow. 'May People Just be A little Kinder to others' - Should be, must be!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 April 2020

Hope is always there I have always Held hope in my hands For self For others, .... touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thank you dear madam for this lovely poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 January 2020

Very relatable and well written, with a theme that all should keep in mind.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

Waiting to be accepted! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jennifer Birchall 04 April 2019

We have to have hope, even if we have nothing else. Wonderful poem dear Lyn.

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