SharonAnn Dawson

Rookie - 20 Points (March 16th / Liverpool)

Together - Poem by SharonAnn Dawson

Hold on tight
Bumpy ride
Cold at night
Hold on tight
Spread you wings
Fly away
Come back to me, don't
Spread your wings
Change is inevitable
Don't change
Not with me
Change is avertable
Be still
My lonesome heart
Be still
My dejected heart
Be still
My unsettled heart
Won't be still
Beats faster as
We hold on tight
We spread our wings
We change.
Together


Comments about Together by SharonAnn Dawson

  • Gold Star - 7,614 Points Savita Tyagi (2/1/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    lovely presentation. enjoyed very much this heart to heart conversation. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,908 Points Lyn Paul (2/1/2015 5:24:00 PM)

    I too loved the flow of these words. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,739 Points Kim Barney (2/1/2015 12:24:00 PM)

    Very nice, but you might want to change line five to
    spread YOUR wings. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,209 Points Tiku . (2/1/2015 7:43:00 AM)

    very nice.loved the flow and concept. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (4/18/2012 8:22:00 AM)

    Lovely poem - concise and well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 2, 2012


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