Today Poem by skitzophrenic lost

Today

Rating: 5.0


Today has changed me
I realize your gone forever
I won't forget this
But will I regret this?
We could talk for hours
We could share our secrets
You could feel my pain
And I could feel yours
Why do we have to make mistakes
I wish the pain would just go away
I'm sure I'll always miss you
But maybe everything does happen for a reason
Maybe this world will make sense one day
But for now, I'm lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shyla Cureton 01 July 2011

Yes, Again, why the poem, 'Today? ' What was your inspiration? I absolutely feel so connected...Wow!

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Shyla Cureton 01 July 2011

Hearfelt! ! ! Thank You for sharing! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 20 June 2011

It is beautiful...memories will never leave you, when you need to talk with the one u mean, talk with the memories where you hang out together...a sweet sacrifice is when we lost someone but we still here, we could still have them..to stay, to live even deeper in heart...just do your day perfectly and talk to the one in your memory 'we do together, coz u in me'...._Unwritten Soul

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 June 2011

Nice poem written very well with great texture and incredible imagery. The ideas are flowing like a cascade. I liked it. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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