To The Past Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

To The Past

Rating: 5.0


Now that he has gone,
credit him for our boldness.
Forgive him for his failings-
he feared he wasn't right.

Let's hope a bolder future
will too forgive our failings,
credit how we shone
to give him greater boldness-
and fears he too is wrong.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Forgive the masculinity, if you must. Replace it with a 'she', an 'it', or a 'they', if you will.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 04 December 2019

I wonder if you are writing about a specific man, or just an imagined character. The tone reminds me a little of Browning's 'The lost Leader'.

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Danny Draper 27 September 2012

An evocative and timeless poem, one with generational transitional resonance and hopefully from the shoulders of giants an infinite timeline tapering equally past and future from an ephemeral present.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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