To: Jim Poem by Dianne Crawford

To: Jim



You was a very good person you was always there for me.

As you passed away I knew my life was never going to be the same.

No matter what I will always love you.

I will never forget you. You did not deserve to die. I didn't deserve to cry.

You will always be in my heart forever and evermore.

We will only be apart for a shor time, and I will see you again; one day soon; with all my love

Dianne.

Friday, February 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death of a friend
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this poem to: James M. McIlrath; one of my very best friend. I will always love you!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Claudge Ben-at 26 February 2016

Dear Dianne. We're sure Jim read and watching you above. This experience has so much to learned about. And acceptance to grief will best fit for us to cherish memories of the ones we had lost. I missed my grandma. She did not even saw me in this world when my mom gave birth to me. I am sure she is watching over me. Well, this is life. What can we say. Just catch up and you'll be there. Something like that..

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Juan Olivarez 26 February 2016

Were instead of was all the way across.

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Juan Olivarez 26 February 2016

The opening line should read, you WERE a good person, do spell check too. otherwise a fairly well written poem.

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