To Be With You Poem by Domy sweet
To Be With You
To be with you
is what I want......
I think it is not soo much
so I am not a selfish giant......
On seeing your eye
I feel to cry.....
And once you say: please don't cry
I feel that you realy try.....
To make me smile
is what you want......
Its good however keep in mind(little suggestion, u instead of you and i instead of I is sometimes not as good in poetry, since your poetry is meant to be as galant as possible. Great work, please check some of mine and rate and comment if you want, Constructive criticism is welcome too. Thankyou, Kilian
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5/6/2024 2:42:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very simple and sweet poem. I am with you.