To Be Free. Poem by Leah Ayliffe

To Be Free.

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Only you can free yourself
keep the cage open
even if you must stay inside
swinging on the swing
singing a tune to show the world you're fine.

Only you can stay free
if you allow yourself to feel it
swim in thoughts of it
when they assure you that you're trapped in chains.

Only you can be free
if you carve your soul in the night sky
and dance your breath on every breeze
during the hours you are buried beneath the ground

When in the dark
do we emanate our own light?

Only then are we free.

Friday, April 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 13 May 2016

I've always found f-r-e-e-d-o-m to be your essential theme because everything is related to it. And at the end of this poem you have a striking image that shows this and brings this short poem to a satisfying closure: WHEN IN THE DARK/DO WE EMANATE OUR OWN LIGHT? This strikes me as a later stage of personal freedom because the light is clearly and securely within you and not borrowed from an outside factor (like various crutches people use) . There are three threatening situations in the previous stanzas - cage, chains, night -none of them really challenges you, but being parts of a world often hostile to freedom you acknowledge them and then move right over them. In fact, they become elements in your story not really antagonistic, for example, night is the backdrop for your creativity: YOU CARVE YOUR SOUL IN THE NIGHT SKY. You have turned night into a tool rather than a thrreat, you've colonized the night so it doesn't threaten you. And then you transform it with the light emanating from within you. And now it is another landscape your freedom can explore and exploit.

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Tango 22 April 2016

This poem is so very true, only you can change things in your life, make a decision to break free. Tango.

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