Titan Poem by Zamir Osorov

Titan

Rating: 5.0


Everyone
must share own part of heaven.
He showed it,
when he lifted universe
on his arms.
He had perfect knowledge
about inward
and outward
structure and deep sence of limitles
and about tight integration
every soul
with the whole.
He knew,
everyone
must share own part of heaven.
from unfolding existence
after Great Big Ban.
But mankind
made from him goddess,
instead share
own part of heaven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2011

structure and deep sence of limitles and about tight integration every soul with the whole. He knew, everyone must share own part of heaven. very deep meaning nice poem

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