Timeless Butterflies... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Timeless Butterflies...

Rating: 5.0


Cross the meadow. On the other side of the hill,
down by, the old watermill. Watching the water swirl,
a little boy, and a little girl. Skipping rocks and fishing,
closing their eyes, and wishing. Climbing trees to
touch the skies, then jumping down, to chase butterflies.
The sun begins to set with a chill, as a little birdie cries
out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still.

Timeless Butterflies...
Thursday, March 11, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: youth,autumn,reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
painting from free paintings/photos.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

WOW! Dear Becca, what a most beautiful tender touching heart poem is this! Congratulations to share this emotive feel! 5 Stars, dearest for you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I cite here your loveliest lines and words: the finalconclusion of all these beauteous cryings-out: ....as a little birdie cries out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still. Such a fascinating phrase! God Bless you greatest, my dea friend

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I am happy that my two responses have gone through..................to you. This amazing poem goes to my Favourites. Thank you for sharing

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Kostas Lagos 11 March 2021

Beautiful poem Rebecca! Really beautiful

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Varsha M 11 March 2021

Lovely one Rebecca. It brought smile on my face. Refreshing childhood glorious memories. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey. Into my favourite.

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Susan Williams 22 January 2023

returned and read this lovely poem again---that is what we do to the well-written, heart-touching, wise poetry the talented poets write---thank you for sharing this lovely gem with us

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 October 2022

Absolutely beautiful poem Rebecca xx

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Anjandev Roy 11 October 2022

Delightful piece......wonderful to read....thanks for sharing......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

This beautiful poem is timeless

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2021

Such a great recollection of the past where the poet is part of the plot as a keen observer! Magnificently presented where the poet puts spotlight on a tender and delightful creature... timeless!

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