Time For Me To Go Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Time For Me To Go

Rating: 5.0


In town greens did I live for long,
But time comes for all things to go,
I too must go crowing my song…

I liked greens, clock tower's ding dong,
Garden insects ever on grow,
I must go now singing last song.

Winds of change blow down all along,
Telling, it's time to make a move,
Your house tenant I was for long.

Now singing last few lines of my song
To go bowing to times that blow,
Time comes in one's life to end song.

Life is but change, there's not so wrong,
Happy I go as friend, not foe,
No one should over-sing his song.

Nor is one remembered for long,
My time is over and I know,
I do find winds of change on flow,
And go chirping the same old song.
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Sparrows, commonly found in most parts of India, have been increasingly hard to find. A chirpy bird, it might have sung its last swan song like this. ____________________________________________________
Villanelles | 02.12 13 |

Thursday, October 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 10 October 2019

Yes dear Poet Poet, you are right, it just happened a few days back and still I do not quite know how, but yes both the poems are the same, may be with some minor changes. I would have normally removed one, but for the valuable feedback sent by some esteemed reader poets.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 October 2019

WHO AM I A QUESTION NO HUMAN CAN ANSWER BUT WE ALL ARE NEURONS ASK ANY MODERN NEUROSURGEON ATOMS OR ATMA BOTH ORIGINATED FROM SANSKRIT ONE HINDI THE OTHER ENGLISH WHICH IS WHICH SOUL IS SIMPLY MAGNETISM ASK ANY MEDICO HOW THEY TAKE M R I

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 October 2019

ATOMS OR ATMA BOTH ORIGINATED FROM SANSKRIT... SOUL IS SIMPLY MAGNETISM ASK ANY MEDICO HOW THEY TAKE M R I (Report) ... Interesting, it is quite possible, many European words have Indic origin (Sanskrit) , now if you can give more details to substantiate what you say.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 October 2019

APPEARS TO BE A REPEAT SIR STILL ITS GOOD NOW JUST IN CASE U AGAIN MISS WHO AM I A QUESTION NO HUMAN CAN ANSWER BUT WE ALL ARE NEURONS ASK ANY MODERN NEUROSURGEON ATOMS OR ATMA BOTH ORIGINATED FROM SANSKRIT ONE HINDI THE OTHER ENGLISH WHICH IS WHICH SOUL IS SIMPLY MAGNETISM ASK ANY MEDICO HOW THEY TAKE M R I

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 October 2019

APPEARS TO BE A REPEAT SIR STILL ITS GOOD... as you say, yes, it is possible, because I generally forget the poem once writ. possibly the theme is repeated, but it would help if you tell me which poem you have in mind that was repeated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 October 2019

A very insightful piece of work sir.......beautifully penned............................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 October 2019

Thanks for your encouraging feedback and rating, Dr Swain

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