Till Eternity Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Till Eternity

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I fall on my knees and
spread my hands to you
The One to whom all praise is due

I sow my tears
and reap in mercy
bountifully, pressed down, shaken together

Rain on me your love
Let me please you my beloved
Comfort my heart

Let us knit together in love
All the days of my life
and till eternity

Tuesday, November 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 December 2018

Wishing you the happiest momentum with the Divine. A very sad poem when the true love is no more. Most lucky you still keep the One Who loves you at all times. Such a most touching poem. Thank you so much for sharing, dear Poetess.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 November 2018

Rain on me your love Let me please you my beloved Comfort my heart..rain on me love......... such beautiful words and imagination to see real love raining especially on you...........you have lot of love in your heart, do u need more love to rain on you?

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 13 November 2018

May you receive all you've been praying for

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Bharati Nayak 13 November 2018

I fall on my knees and spread my hands to you The One to whom all praise is due - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Let us knit together in love All the days of my life and till eternity - - - - Love is a blissful feeling.It is only but a part of divine love. Such a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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