You Poem by Susheela Alexiose

You

Rating: 5.0


Your smile opens up the gate of joy for me
Your laugh adds melody to it
Your voice makes me glad
As I know my love is near
I don't have to fear

How I love your presence
And the mere thought of your absence
Bleeds my heart
How I fear the fear of losing you
As I never found a caring heart
All the days of my life

And I fell in love with this precious jewel
Who made my heart to dance with joy
My eyes to twinkle with love
My soul to leap with gladness

Sunday, October 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 21 October 2018

Susheela, such a lovely poem...................10++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2018

How love gives immense pleasures has been astutely inscribed here. It may be cited... And I fell in love with this precious jewel Who made my heart to dance with joy My eyes to twinkle with love My soul to leap with gladness A beautiful poem on love and life nicely executed.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

How I love your presence And the mere thought of your absence Bleeds my heart.........this precious jewel............may God bless your lover.... it is my prayer for you.. thank u. tony

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Savita Tyagi 24 October 2018

Lovely poem. Flowing straight from the heart filled with love. Thanks for sharin.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

Firm, ardent and passionate poem, very insightful poem, love reading your poems.5 Stars fullest on Top!

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 November 2018

And the mere thought of your absence Bleeds my heart How I fear the fear of losing you As I never found a caring heart All the days of my life... love expressed in a very endearing way...... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Sandra Feldman 03 November 2018

Quite passionate and beautiful. Very well expressed and far reaching. A truly insightful poem.

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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2018

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Susheela.

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Jaya J 30 October 2018

If only I have the same talent as yours to describe how beautiful this poem is

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